ZoicPoet's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[CS Moonsong V.2]

It's good. Although, I feel you can add something.

I really can't figure out what, but there is this very bland feel to it. Maybe a background chello, those instruments are extremely strong. Then for the back up for the back up chello, I suggest use a pad, a powerful deep ocean like pad. Just an idea. This song is good.

Reminds me of the moon, most definately. I wish this played on Dark Cloud's moon level. The other song was annoying, and was actually very rude, because it felt like it was mocking me. Especially when I was forced to use that one character.. D:< Hope this helps!

~ ZoicPoet

[[Take It Slow]]

O.O

O.O This song is awesome . I really have nothing to say .. 5/5 10/10. O . M . G

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fishfood2021 responds:

Thanks for the review homie :)

[Wind Chimes]

o.o

This is what should be on the radio . None of this Lady Gag ; Douchy metal ; Screamo nonsense. This is uplifting. Intense. Beautiful. Soothing. Just purely benevolent. Outstanding. 5/5 10/10. Keep making music. Phenominal.

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fishfood2021 responds:

Finally a review haha. Thanks a bunch homie! I'm trying to keep myself awake because I spent too much time on this for one night and now its almost 6am and I have class at nine so now I get to comment a review to keep myself awake even longer :D. Anywho, I'm glad you liked it. This is definitely one of my favorite songs right now. Oh, and I love you :)

[~Last Stand]

My only complaint.

Those drums are really repetitive. The rest is spot on. I can invision a space battle.
Not like aliens, or anything. A fight with an entity threatening to blow up Earth, and some cliche power grants you to pass through the Ozone to fight this entity once and for all. 5/5 10/10. I liked the piano more though. The piano is a god instrument.

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xninja04 responds:

haha thanks alot, ill see what I can do with the drums =D. Yea dude the part with the piano is my favorite part =P

Thanks alot for the review.

[Walk and Seek]

This is AMAZING.

Newgrounds' score system is the new illuminati. Watch out.

This song was magnificent, reminded me of night lakes, fireflies, the night skies.
Just beautiful. 5/5 10/10. Well deserved. The score is horrendous. I believe people who voted this down were jealous. They should be. This song kicks ass.

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OpenLight responds:

Whoa, thanks! I'm psyched to read that review. I worked on this almost all of yesterday. This is the first song I've used flanger on too, and figuring out how to make it work let me put some extra passion into it.

Thank you so much!

[Bluezberry Pie]

This is very nice. Wasn't a fan of your other.

''Experiments''. Thats just me though. Did I give those songs, 0's? Did I give you a stupid review? No. This is what people need to learn to do. LEarn to vote due to the quality of the song, not the ''standards'' of their taste. This song was very relaxing,
reminded me of a journey. Very peaceful, with a teaspoon of chaos. 5/5 10/10. Don't let the score fool you. This is awesome.

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[Industrial (The First Attempt)]

Ok, it's not industrial. It's good though.

Very nice song you got here. Reminds me alot of classic games, before all these other games. Very well organized, a bit chaotic, but that is fine. 5/5 10/10. Don't let the score put you down. Don't let your music fall. Score doesn't determine anything but our world's lack of understanding. Great job. Goodluck~

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[Clawer (Zomg Mini's New Song!)]

I see.

Learn to master your stuff, especially when you are aware that you didn't master it. Ask friends, or someone in the audio forum they would give you tips.

Now, I thought the song was great, but it sounded like my head was being bashed by a hammer, because of your lack of mastering .-. When you submit songs, just because you sat there listening to it over and over, getting used to it's sound and form, doesn't mean us listeners will be able to cope with it on our first listen. You would be amazed how different your song would sound, say if you didn't hear it for a week. Sometimes, we hear different things during different state of minds . Just how humans are. Then, there is what is more likely the case. People don't like the monotony of going through the songs individually 1 by 1, listening to the entire thing. They get bitchy, and start reluctantly checking through the songs, and then it all relies on luck if they catch the beautiful parts of your songs or the ugly parts. I have learned to accept it no matter what, not as a song, but as what it was designed to sound like from the creator themself.

So, all in all. Learn to not be lazy and master your songs. Here is your 5/5 10/10 you deserve for the hardwork I can hear.

I wish people would stop expecting all of us to be as good as Paragon, JoshHunsaker, Zenon. We could someday be, but when people don't take their time to exercise another person's time. The time of the unexercised person runs out, for energy usually relies off other people's energy. Again, that is how us humans are. Attention is a drug. A way of living. Attention gives us life. We like to be known for who we are, and what we stand for. Lately, that hasn't been the case. My advice to you, is to never give up. Keep going, you are on your way to some type of potential. Scores don't represent anything but jealousy ; stupidity ; and arrogance. Goodluck~

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minicoz responds:

Wow! Thanks for the cooment and rating! This is the longest comment I have ever received! Really Thanks

OK, yeah I know the mastering sucks, I really need to learn a lot more. But As I state on the first day I opened the account, I dont really upload any of my good work, well this is where I upload the songs that I make in my free time. But yeah, I can do a lot better with the mastering.

What I have noticed is that newgrounds does not like EDM music. Well, basically, like undiscovered artist type. Very judging, and well. I dont really like to upload my music here, it always gets very low rating and pretty much makes me feel bad about the song. I am happy that you gave me a nice and honest opinion. I shall improve :)

[!War!]

!Score!

This was simply epic. I don't see that much. This is like a child's play of the Saw theme. I really liked the way you sampled all this together. Beautiful. 5/5 10/10.

It's supposed to be simple. Reminds me of a factory, or a break out of a building after being held hostage for years.

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death-is-forever responds:

Simple is more or less what I was aiming for. No use in adding extra nonsense to clutter it up. :P

Thanks for the review. Keep it fresh!